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sorry about your guitar ([personal profile] cityphonelines) wrote2005-04-18 04:49 pm

Fic - Rosebud

Title:Rosebud
Pairing: B/J
Rating: PG-13 (cause I refuse to learn the new ratings system) for language
Summary: Brian can give Justin the things he wants, but he'll always do it his way.
Timeline: Anytime after they get back together.
Disclaimer: Pretty? Yes. Mine? Nope.
Beta'd by [livejournal.com profile] crazydiamondsue, except for the very end.
A/N: The tenses may seem a tad wonky but it's on purpose ;)
A/N2: Yes, it's a real drink.


He's taking comfort in the familiar; the bass thudding in his chest and at his feet, the colored spotlights casting mottled brightness over everything, the dig of the bar edge against his mid-back. And if anybody’s noticed that his stare is trained at the entrance, well, they know that it isn't worth mentioning.

Brian's familiar is about to go haywire and really at this point he's okay with that.

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"So, where's Justin this evening?"

There's less bite in Michael's voice these days and Brian is beyond grateful for it. He grabs Ted's arm and twists his wrist into an orange tinted patch of light, reads the time and throws the appendage back toward the owner.

"Out."

"Yeah, he has been for years; and if he wasn't then fucking his way through Babylon every night with you would be a big hint. What I asked was why he isn't gracing us with his presence."

Inwardly, Brian really wishes that Michael"s boyfriends didn’t encourage Michael's immaturity, his attempts at cute humor; outwardly he simply sighs with mock annoyance and genuine affection.

"He'll be here soon," Brian said, refusing to give unnecessary details as usual and sliding his eyes back to the club's front door.

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He always feels like he should feel Justin the minute he enters a room. Like his skin should prickle or his stomach should tumble, but, no, unless he sees him he doesn't know, not until Justin's arms are wrapped around him and his face is pressed into Brian's back. Sometimes he wishes it were more like those fucking bullshit romantic comedies, but it's not and he's continuously taken by surprise.

But now that he's finally here it doesn't matter anyway.

Justin treats him like a homing beacon, coming toward him through the crowd in that easy walk-dance-walk way that he has. Brian figures he's got about forty-eight seconds before Justin's pushed up against him at the bar, so he shouts his order to the bartender and by the time he's done rolling his eyes and explaining how to make it, he's down to a single digit countdown.

5… Justin at ten paces

4… shot poured

3… shot in hand

2… Justin pressed against him, face tilted up

1… shot at Justin's lips in lieu of kiss

"What the fuck, Brian? And a 'hello honey' to you, too."

"Drink it."

"It’s pink."

"I’m aware of that. Drink it."

Justin used two fingers and a thumb to pluck the shot glass from Brian's hand; holding it above his head and turning it slightly in evaluation he frowned at Brian. "It looks like Pepto Bismol, kinda gross."

Since Brian's giving him that look that makes him feel like he's missed the point of the story, and he knows that this could go on all night, he gives in and drinks it. "Mmmm, tastes like ice cream, what is it?"

Brian already has a line of identical shots waiting on the bar and Justin's a bit afraid of the look on the bartender's face. "Drink 'em down," Brain said, ignoring the question, "and be quick about it. I’ve been waiting all day to fuck you."

"All of them? There's gotta be like ten shots! I can't drink all that."

Brian pushed himself off the bar and stepped behind Justin, chest to back, caging him in with his arms. "Actually, there are eleven shots. Now get to it, this isn't up for negotiation."

And just like that, Justin realizes this is important. He slams the shots in succession, flipping each small glass upside down as he finishes with it. They're so good, sweet and creamy, and his mind is so so busy running away with the reasons why Brian's insisting on this game, that he doesn't realize that he's drunk the last one until his hand reaches for the next and finds nothing.

"Those were good," he said, and though the liquor is far from strong the the effect from having so many so fast is already creeping up on him. "Really, really good; like strawberries and coconut."

Brian's still standing behind him, breathing on him, breathing him. Justin watches as Brian's hands lift off the bar to settle on his hips.

"Time for my taste," he said, spinning Justin around and licking his lips slowly, "You’re right, that is good. And you’re such a good boy, so trusting. My boy."

"I think I deserve a reward," Justin said, moving his mouth against Brian's.

"The shots were your reward; a half shot of Tequila Rose, half a shot of Captain Morgan’s Parrot Bay and you’ve got yourself a Rosebud." It's explained in that way that Brian has, like what he said was a perfectly detailed explanation and you couldn't possibly still be confused.

He watched with amusement as Justin's brain struggled to catch on. "Twelve shots," Justin mumbles the words like a he's calculating a word problem. Brian sees it all fall together as Justin's eyes glitter with knowledge. "That's a dozen rosebuds."

"Now you can’t say I’ve never bought you flowers."

[identity profile] spuzz.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
::squees happily:: That was excellent. It ended up in a interesting place, I wasn't expecting. And also I loved the mystery of the shots and the meaning behind them.

I really like that you went opposite of the traditional "always know where you are thing." Brian has to be frustrated about not knowing when/where Justin is at all times. Adds a interesting tension.

“Time for my taste,” he said, spinning Justin around and licking his lips slowly, “You’re right, that is good. And you’re such a good boy, so trusting. My boy.”
Um...guh. mcvdlafjeopirjgtu guh.



[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I had to throw in Brian calling Justin 'my boy', 'cause, well, KINK!

I'll do your drabbly thing tomorrow, I have part of it done. shh... it's RPS... don't tell

[identity profile] msjudi.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
That was really cute! :D

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!
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[identity profile] msdori.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
That is such a PERFECT Brian Kinney gesture. <G> Thank you.

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] edenmalfoy.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Loves it. Love, love, love it!

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank, thank, thank you!

[identity profile] brandil.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Perfect!

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

A dozen rosebuds

[identity profile] the-lady-revan.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
That was a great story! I loved it, and it caused a huge :SQUEE:!!!
So very Brian :)

Re: A dozen rosebuds

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
So very Brian :)

Thank you so much!!

[identity profile] darksylvia.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my god, I love it! Best sappy non-sap EVER.

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Sappy non-sap? I like that! Thank you!

[identity profile] crazydiamondsue.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Squee!! Still love the part with Ted as a time piece. And the countdown to Justin's arrival. ROSEBUDS!!!

I meant to ask while beta-ing and got distracted if Tequila Rose was involved in the pink. New Years 2000 has unfortunate Tequila Rose memories for me. After I spent the first new hours of the new century barfing up 1/2 a gallon of cheap rosé, my friend Michele met me in the hallway with a small plastic cup of pink. I screamed, "No more Tequila Rose!" She frowned and said, "It's Pepto!" I screamed louder, "Even worse!!!" But maybe with Captain Morgan....

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks; clock!Ted is my favorite part, probably because I had to rewrite it like eight times before it was just right. You know what's fun about you beta'ing for me? Not giving you the end of a story, like ever.

I meant to ask while beta-ing and got distracted if Tequila Rose was involved in the pink.

But you had an inkling, because you are SMART. My BFRL Dana loves Tequila Rose; me? I'm okay with it, but Captain Morgan is my sweet liquor vice and Rosebuds are good. Though 12 would most likely gross me out. Too sweet.
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[personal profile] lynnenne 2005-04-18 08:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Vinnie, that was just *awesome*. Perfect Brian voice, and just the kind of anti-romantic gesture he would make. I loved this. (And I just realized, I don't even have a QaF icon! D'oh.)

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 08:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw! Thank you! One of the reasons I love Brian is because I'm an off-the-beaten-path-romantic, I don't do flowers and I'll never remember an anniversary, but my love is shown in other ways, much like his. Also, 'cause he's pretty.

[livejournal.com profile] spuzz makes some fab icons, she has an icon journal called [livejournal.com profile] icon_doodles if you want to check it out, she does a lot of QaF.

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[identity profile] queenydiva.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
BWAH! Excellently cute! Thanks.

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you
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[identity profile] phibetafunkay.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)
That was pitch-perfect!

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!
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[identity profile] qafhappy.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
So good!

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks ;)

[identity profile] severina2001.livejournal.com 2005-04-18 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Perfect Brian Kinney gesture! :)

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-22 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
That's our Brian for ya!

Thanks!
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[identity profile] ayesakara.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
So cute. ;)

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you muchly!

[identity profile] paddies.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 12:50 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwww...that was the perfect Brian Kinney gesture!!

Very sweet. ♥

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 08:55 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, Brian knows how to treat his boy.

[identity profile] talullahred.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
lol, that was so funny and sweet. Literally. :D

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 08:56 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! Thank you!

[identity profile] rae-1985.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
That was so cute. heee. Brian gave him a dozen rosebuds.

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 08:56 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] anelith.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 06:21 am (UTC)(link)
Gah!

That's the sound of a frustrated non-QaF watcher who desperately wants to watch QaF, but lives in a one-TV household with a husband who, while indulgent of my slashy reading hobby, would get a little huffy if I commandeered the TV for the real thing. Darn it! What's a girl to do? Fic like this really makes me want it. Hmmm... Maybe when the boys are in school full time in a year or so...

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 09:00 am (UTC)(link)
You can do what I did (and what I've forced Sue to do so she could catch up): I downloaded most of the eps from [livejournal.com profile] qafdownloads so I watch 'em on my PC, since watching it on the main TV (the one that had showtime) made my dad supremely uncomfortable and NetFlix was taking too long.

It's not the wittiest show, it's no Buffy, but it totally sucks you in and the boys are very pretty so it balances out.

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[identity profile] kimberbaby.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 11:55 am (UTC)(link)
“I think I deserve a reward,” Justin said, moving his mouth against Brian’s.

So v. v. cute. Love it ! ♥

Happy LJ Anniv. to me--Thanks for the present. :-)

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-22 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for reading! Happy LJ-iversary!

[identity profile] happier-bunny.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 01:57 pm (UTC)(link)
That was totally adorable!

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-20 10:56 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] thebrandytook.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 05:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Love! Just so cute and awesome. Sweet in a way that only can be done by Brian.

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-20 10:56 am (UTC)(link)
Sweet in a way that only can be done by Brian.

Too true!! Glad you liked it.

[identity profile] luciblue.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 07:28 pm (UTC)(link)
That was...yum.
What do um, Brian and Justin do on said rosebuds, hmm?

<3.

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-20 10:57 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! And that would be a whole 'nother ficlet ;)

[identity profile] meret.livejournal.com 2005-04-19 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! Very funny! :)

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-20 10:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks ;)

[identity profile] anelith.livejournal.com 2005-04-20 07:52 am (UTC)(link)
So I've been thinking about your tenses (since you called attention to them with your A/N) and still can't quite figure out what's going on. You use the past tense only rarely; at first I thought it was only at the end but then I saw it was used the first time when Justin took the first shot glass from Brian. My only theory was that the present tense was used when Brian was "tense" (if you'll pardon the pun) about his upcoming present, so as to convey a sense of immediacy, and then relaxed back into the past tense at least occasionally after Justin arrived and things were going as planned. Am I anywhere near the mark?

Today I feel like Pooh, a Bear of very little brain.

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2005-04-20 11:05 am (UTC)(link)
I like your theory for two reasons:
1) It makes sense
2) It makes me seem smarter than I am!

Really it's a combo of a few things; part of it is that since my fics as a rule tend to be one-shots they are written in the present tense for the most part. I don't prefer my writing in the past tense, even though it's the most acceptable way of writing fanfic. But with this, I kinda wanted it to almost feel uncomfortable and maybe... jumbly, because really Brian isn't sure how this is gonna be taken. He could get blown off or laughed at if Justin doesn't see the gesture for what it is, or Justin could make this huge over dramatic teary thing out of it.

Hmm, that was a bit pretentious, huh? Can we go with this: I don't know past tense from present? ; )

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[identity profile] seanmegansean.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Really cute :) And such a Brian way to deal with the whole 'flower business* ;D

[identity profile] adis723.livejournal.com 2008-08-10 10:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

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