::squees happily:: That was excellent. It ended up in a interesting place, I wasn't expecting. And also I loved the mystery of the shots and the meaning behind them.

I really like that you went opposite of the traditional "always know where you are thing." Brian has to be frustrated about not knowing when/where Justin is at all times. Adds a interesting tension.

“Time for my taste,” he said, spinning Justin around and licking his lips slowly, “You’re right, that is good. And you’re such a good boy, so trusting. My boy.”
Um...guh. mcvdlafjeopirjgtu guh.