ext_237410 ([identity profile] karl-stahl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cityphonelines 2007-07-20 11:54 pm (UTC)

Beautiful story. Great take on Faith and Xander. The mutual sharing was very well done.

One thing nags me: In one scene Faith tells Xander that Robin thinks he loves her and in the next scene Faith sleeps with Xander? While it was fitting in that situation (no judging) I can't help to wonder how things will develop next? Was it a one time thing to be kept secret or will it turn into something more? Either way, how will Robin deal?

Your story made me think. It's that good. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading it.

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